Purpose:experience from camp, using short sentences to create suspense.
WALT: Entertain (recount)
Task: To write a recount based on something scary or suspenseful that happened to you.I think I did well I just maybe next time to add on to those boring sentences.
Criteria: I canSelf Assessment
Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)
Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)
Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done?
Peer coment: Bella I think that you could add some more wow and you could tell every one about what is happening in the story.